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Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-04-09 12:06 PM

It's done and over with now
sent to slaughter like a simplistic outcast cow
wasting away in a repetitive radioactive merry-go-round
and theres nothin I can do
but it doesn't really matter
for everything throws me under, around, and tears me asunder
for you all act out in your antidisestablishmentarianistic way
but is ther anything to be done?
or is there any drive to do anything?
by my watch, I've seen none.
all I've seen is the crash of activity
and the festering formation of boredom and nothingness.
I just long to forget it
because I hate to endeer it
thus I keep sneering at it
but the only thing is
I'll never do anything about it.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-04-09 12:10 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-04-12 12:01 PM

Heheh love your name.

Liked the poem

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-12 12:42 PM

GOOD POEM I LOVED IT...KEEP WRITTIN ...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-04-12 06:17 PM

DonJuan~
Welcome to the forums ... and your name certainly caught my eye when I was scanning the Daily Topics posts ..... go here and you'll see why~
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Well, that's my story ... and I'm sticking to it~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-04-12 07:32 PM

I also think that the name is cute. Nice poem and keep up the good work.
Welcome to Passions!

~Alli~

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

6 posted 2004-04-21 10:36 PM

well thankyou all who took a look and critiqued the poem. I'm glad you liked it and i'm gracious for your exceptence on this forum

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