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Teen Poetry #7

Neverending Tears

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-04-08 11:23 PM

Your love,
flowing through my veins,
causing tears of love,
and tears of pain.
Neverending.

~Short but.. well... maybe just a lil' bit sweet! ~Lol~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-12 07:23 PM

I liked it a lot even though it was short, you made your point and it was *sweet*

~Alli~

Mick Hawkes
Member

since 2000-10-26

Posts 90
Tees-side , England

2 posted 2004-10-20 06:48 PM

short sweet & to the point, I enjoyed it very much.. one of the great things about receiving someone's true love is that they know that they have made them self's vulnerable "inside" yet trust you with it!..

Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-21 04:04 PM

the gift lies in being able to strike someone with a few words *smile*

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