Red Canvassed Eyes to Match the Scene

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Teen Poetry #7

Red Canvassed Eyes to Match the Scene

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-04-08 10:52 AM

Red Canvassed Eyes to Match the Scene

Pretty lights among the crimson stains
Turn ous love into beauty.
Turned down eyes and red pictured frames
Keep grasping at our ring fingers.
They hold onto the peace inside that never shouts
But only whispers when spoken to.
The stilled life shots have frozen our bouts
And opened our hearts to realities of life and .
A play on words with a word on plays
Never sang the eulogy the same.
The nights of forever shroud the way
And still we hold onto happy picture frames.

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

1 posted 2004-11-22 10:45 PM

Loriel your writings are beautiful. You can desribe the simplest of things and overturn a realm of your own,your band must have amazing lyrics.

Sorry for sounding really sappy and lame

<3
Persephone

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

2 posted 2004-11-22 10:47 PM

Holy Crap, yeah sorry while i was typing that i was on the phone with my friend Loriel, so in my mind i thought i was typing to her so i put Loriel,Bleh im dumb.

Sorry
<3
Persephone

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-11-23 10:19 AM

thank you very much for the compliments. haha, i was kinda wondering who you thought I am. haha.

*Alli4000*