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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2004-04-08 04:45 AM


Ya, it's long..but..ya.
Out with the old
In with the new
I can finally live my life
Now that I’m away from you

My dreams have been crushed
By what you've changed me to be
Now I can let it all roam
Since I’ve gotten myself free

I was blinded by the beauty
That you conjured from inside
But when I found the source of power
I was the one that kept our hands tied

I left it out of my conscious
Every time you broke down and cried
I blamed ever little thing on you
When I was the one who lied

We tangled out live into the others
And on the poisons we let out minds feed
The drugs that filled our life
Became something that we need

With out an altered state of mind
Out lies we couldn't sell
And the energy that we created
Started to become a personal hell

Seemingly we needed this struggle
That started to fill every day
I have no reason for leaving you
Just know things are better this way

It’s been a year at least I think
Since my mind last tangled with you
And all the lies I’ve told myself
Have been slowly becoming true

All the pain that I’ve kept inside
Has started to eat me though
It’s all too much for me to bear
So I sit at home, alone, being blue

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

© Copyright 2004 Matt - All Rights Reserved
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
1 posted 2004-07-07 05:46 PM


i liked it, keep writing.

~*.:Leah:.*~

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-07-07 08:05 PM


Maybe it was long, but I liked it alot as well.  Nice job, keep writing!!

~Alli~

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