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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-08-27 10:32 PM

This is sorta long, and probably not so good, but thats okay, i was still able to get everything out, and thats what counts. Atleast for right now.

You throw my emotions around,
like i am a game,
and my feelings are the ball.
You show no emotion,
yet so much at the same time.
I dont know what to do anymore.
I wish my life was a movie,
so i could rewind,
and see what we did wrong.
One miniute i am in your strong arms,
protected,
thinking of nothing
but how much i love you,
while listening to you
silently whisper my name.
Then you act like you hate me,
and blame everything
that went wrong
on me,
when i dont even know what i did.
What did i do?
Please,
i dont think i can take it much longer.
I long for your touch,
i miss you so much.
Please talk to me,
i cant yell anymore,
and i have cryed myself into a drought.
an inner drought that is.
I have no love left,
i gave it all to you.
I have nothing,
you've sucked me dry.
i sit by the phone every night,
willing it to ring,
only when it does,
it isnt you.
i shouldnt be like this,
i shouldnt have let you in.
I should have kept it all to myself.
I should have been selfish,
like you.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2004-08-29 06:59 AM

again beautiful.....
your ability to write down your emotions is one of the best ways for you to heal.... even though it hurts it will get better and you WILL come thru the other side alright....
keep your head high, a smile on your face and laughter in your voice....
if you wanna chat my email is hells_angel_128@hotmail.com ....
feel free to email me for a laugh or a shoulder to cry on...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2004-08-29 10:36 AM

I thought this was written quite well hunny! And as ruth mentioned above if you ever need a shoulder to cry on or need someone to make you smile you know you will always have me to be there for ya!! Keep up the good work hun.

Love Always,
Chris

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-09-05 08:08 PM

Yes! Just being able to release your anger and sorrow and emotion onto a piece of paper is what really counts...and that's why this poem is great!
If you ever want to get intouch with me, my e-mail is: alg20@juno.com and my aim s/n is: Alli4000

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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