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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-04-05 07:52 AM



Nervous.
Worried.
Stressed.

My body won’t stop shivering,
Even as we speak.
I know that you’re okay,
But I’m still shaken.

Don’t you realize
You’ve become such a big part of me,
That if something happened to you,
I’d be a lot less me.

When you told me,
My ears heard the words,
But it didn’t register in my mind.
I just couldn’t believe it.

Even though I know you’re safe,
My mind won’t stop screaming-
“You could’ve DIED!”
I couldn’t have handled that.

I guess I must’ve thought,
That nothing could ever happen,
To you or me.
But neither of us are immortal.

My biggest lesson-
Live everyday
Like it’s your last.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

© Copyright 2004 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2004-04-05 05:49 PM


a persons last days are always on there heels...how fast can you run?

i don't have a felling for this poem i'm not shore if i liked it or not but either way thanks for the read...keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

UnsilencedWords666
Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears
2 posted 2004-04-06 09:04 PM


I'm not sure that I can say exactly what it was aobut htis that made me like it...but it was really good...keep writing!

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

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