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*Alli4000*
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0 posted 2004-04-04 07:57 PM


THANK YOU!

T hanks for everything you always do.    
H ave I ever told you there is no better friend than you?
A lways telling me your secrets and speaking your mind;
N ever realizing how every move you make is so kind.
K nowing I sometimes forget to say “Thanks”,

Y ou never hold it against me, never lose your grace.
O nly now it is time for me to return the favor (so…)
U ltimately thank you for every moment with you I will always savor.


I would like to dedicate this poem to my best friend Valerie! Thanks so much for everything!



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1 posted 2004-04-04 09:29 PM


I hope you share this with her, this is what friendship is all about........

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

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2 posted 2004-04-06 03:15 AM


This was vary creative I don't see many things like this here any more grate post and thanks for the read...keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Ixxi
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3 posted 2004-04-06 11:32 AM


I like this. It's very sweet to dedicate a poem to a friend.

-Ixxi

"Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet"
- Funeral For A Friend

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4 posted 2004-04-10 06:12 PM


Thanks everybody so much for your replies!

~Alli~

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5 posted 2004-04-14 02:47 PM


This poem, is so cute! You wrote this poem to your friend?! Oh, how nice done! It's a really sweet poem, it tells exactly what friendship is, and is meant to be and should be... -.Thanks for the lovely poem..
         *Fleur*

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6 posted 2004-04-14 02:49 PM


Good

~*Faries exist.*~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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7 posted 2004-04-14 02:56 PM


truly i loved it ,it was soo real and soo true ,,it made me feel soo proud to meet people everyday on here in this wonderful website and in this wonderful world ....like feeling i am alive ,,well thanks  for this wonderful poem...

        ::^love^::

*Alli4000*
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8 posted 2004-04-14 05:48 PM


Thanks all you guys for your comments, I really appreciate it!

*Alli*

xno4everx
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9 posted 2004-04-14 10:59 PM


i did these kind of poems when i was in 4th grade..sorry not my type...

//..Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one..\\

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10 posted 2004-04-15 06:24 PM


It's okay that you didn't really like my poem, xno4everx.  It's your opinion and I respect it. Thanks for commenting.

~Alli~

SwEeTnSeXy18
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11 posted 2004-07-02 01:02 AM


Alli:
This is sweet...I did this to a poem once about a guy I liked named
N
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Great Poem!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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12 posted 2004-07-02 01:41 AM


Glad you enjoyed it Lisa...thanks for commenting!

~Alli~

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