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Sass
Junior Member

since 2003-05-10

Posts 21

0 posted 2004-04-04 06:02 PM

Lost away.
Swallowed whole by the tears with a fierce grip. Twisting and turning me down into the sadness that is eating my life.
To many tears I have waisted on you. Because nomatter what I say, I am still condemn.
You dart your hurtfull looks at me, hoping I notice.
Brushing it off like nothing, I laugh as I pass, praying that I am the only one who hears my heart break. Loud crashes within me, signifying a new crack placing it's foundation.
Endless tears run down my bloodied up face. Your words hit harder then any blow from a fist. I bleed with pain and the air is filled with the substance.
Wishing on a burnt out star. It's like looking into a mirror. My smile fades to black and all that's left is my silhouette.
Like celophane, i'm unoticed, invisable, expendable. Go buy another household problem child at your corner store.
You watch me sit here, the moon creating irridecent beams through my tear drops, and you smile. Each drop that falls to the fabric of my sweatshirt spells the words achievment and happiness to you. Filling your heart with warmpth as mine freazes to the point of death.
Lost away.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-04-04 08:25 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

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Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-04 11:26 PM

Wow, the imagery in this is sooo... amazing. I loved this poem. Welcome to passions. Very awesome first post. Cant wait to see more.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

3 posted 2004-04-13 11:16 AM

Fantastic... Do I need to say more...? I don't think so, 'cause this is absolutely awesome!

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