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Ixxi
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since 2004-01-02
Posts 77
England

0 posted 2004-04-02 01:13 PM



I need to see
What I never wanted to have seen.
Left there
For unprotected innocence to hold.

Pushed away from your senses...
Cursed with dumb still untouched lips,
Deadened nerves
With the powers of Lightning.

So average that you can't expect
You weren't born with luck on your side.
My own flesh and blood,
You used yourself to my unturned eyes.

Walk away, it's too late to run now.
Damage you caused would murder me gently,
I screamed to you but silenced myself
From your evil side.

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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2004-04-02 04:37 PM


    ened nerves
With the powers of Lightning

excellent lines. this was a very very good poem. the lines above were awesome.
-alex

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