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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 92
PA, USA

0 posted 2004-04-01 05:02 PM



Deep inside, I am but a child
who puts on her grown up act
whenever she has an audience.
But once the doors close
and the lights begin to fade,
I know that I am truly alone.
Smiles are forced, tears are hidden
my life is nothing but a charade
that I can't seem to stop.
I'm stable one day, falling apart the next
and all I want is to be able to wake up
and be comfortable in my own skin.

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infinite disaster
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 69
Illinois
1 posted 2004-04-01 05:11 PM


Wow ... that was really good. I can definately relate to that, that is what makes your poems really amazing. Keep up the great work.  Much love, Akie.

When I find the courage, I will embrace you.  When I find the strength, I will erase you.

a123
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 72

2 posted 2004-04-02 04:50 AM


amazing..i love your poems. keep writting
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