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thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23
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0 posted 2004-03-28 05:01 PM


The destruction of myself
may not be as it seems
Cimbling all the way
but falling from the goal

The reprecussions won't help
the splinters between my dreams
Regressing all the way
and falling back to nothing

The instructions to myself,
written in gold as it seems
Glittering wishes melt away
Always back to nothing


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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
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1 posted 2004-03-28 05:04 PM


this poem ponints out the problems with moast dreams they seem like the right thing but getting threr can sometime be more then the reward is worth...good post and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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