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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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untitled sorrow sorrow fills my lungs and threatens to flow from my mouth, But I will hold it in my veins and refuse to show the signs. Maybe you will come back to comfort me with love in tow And then the day will be right and the rain will cleanse us. Now the pressure inside of this head broils until it bursts But not how you would think of a head bursting outward, I implode. My heart shrinks away to hide within, behind the emptiness. Will you pity the things that i keep once again away? My blo*d red apologies cover your road that remains untroden, Bury me alive inside the tombs made of words, the lying love. The de*d sleep with me tonight and we bask in chilling winds And the whispers we hear sound faintly of your voice. The voice calls for us to rise and love once again and anew, But we know that lies taste as candy to hungry listeners. I am de*d to you... I am de*d to you... now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
that was great. "My heart shrinks away to hide within, behind the emptiness." i relate to that,many times we deny/mask what we feel/what our heart tells us. "The voice calls for us to rise and love once again and anew" thats another great line its a hope for love again even thru the intense sorrow and selfdenial.i totally love this poem. Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved. |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
and by the way, the title is P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved. |
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