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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-03-22 03:40 PM



Fall…
I just fall behind…

Dreaming-
Writing-
Screaming-
Fighting.

That’s what happens,
In this room,
This room of hate,
Such state of gloom.

Slip…
I just slip away…

Feeling-
Weeping-
Healing-
Sleeping.

This is all I have left,
This heart,
This heart of rain,
Nothing to gain from the start.

Break…
I just break down…

Racing-
Forgetting-
Facing-
Regretting.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-22 04:15 PM


Awesome.
I like it.
Especially the ending.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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