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Teen Poetry #7

dirty clothes

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-03-19 08:01 PM

and I continue to wait
for my personal perfection.

You may raise your hand to brush me away.
at any given moment, just spray me with windex and my smuge will disappear.

yes, its pain, long and thin.
a smile that is too bright.
too yellow, too rounded,
I suppose I have grown tortured.

You have so much to learn.
These are the years that we wear our emotions like clothes.
You tossed me in the hamper.
You grew sick of my dense smell.
So you wear her new fragrance.
So light and refreshing.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-03-22 04:27 PM

ohh... that really has to bite.
I loved the poem though.
Very awesome.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2004-03-22 05:08 PM

this poem is full of poison daggers, the emotion feels vary thick but it's all displayed extremely well......going in my library if you don't mind............think happy thoughts but don't suppress and keep wirting.

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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