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aRiEsAnGeL
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since 2004-03-04
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0 posted 2004-03-14 10:28 PM



How come we feel so apart from each other?
Life isnt supposed to be this way
We are supposed to be together

Together in life
Living on top of the world
Having the mother/daughter realtionship that is needed more than anything

When we are together,it just isnt enough
I want to be able to support each other through hard times
Hold each other more
Talk about the lives that we've missed
I miss you more and more as I get older

I am so sad without your touch everyday
Or a kiss on the forehead and telling me you love me
Time is slipping away
Maybe God has a reason for life to be the way it is...but why?
I cant see

I know that we will be together again
maybe not now.....but soon
I hope that you and I both are able to hold on just a little bit longer...
I know we can

I love you so much Mom
Please remember that
You will be in my heart forever and always


© Copyright 2004 Naomi Marie Alligood - All Rights Reserved
muchos
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 102

1 posted 2004-03-14 10:49 PM


this is a sad poem. my heart sank when i read it. aww. i hope you feel better and that you and your mom (if possible) can get closer. i havent seen my mom for a really long time and i know what its like to miss her. all the luck girl. i like this poem. good expression
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2004-03-14 10:56 PM


Naomi, divorce is a hard thing. I wish that your father and I could have made it work, for the sake of you and your sister, but this is the way it happened.

God has supplied you with your father and your step-mother. If you and I were together all the time, you wouldn't have them so much...and what about your sister? Does she have a say? It's a bad situation...seems like choices just are not there...but you are taken care of...you are not lonely...you are loved...it could be worse.

I can't change the past, no matter how hard I wish. We are family, no matter what...all of us. God will show the right direction in due time...but I don't blame you for being angry for having to wait so long...I'm kinda angry too.

Everything will be okay.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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3 posted 2004-03-17 07:19 PM


Aww... this was so sad, and well just really SAD!!! My parents split too, when i was younger( like when i was born), and me and my father are the ones with the problems. I get along okay with my mom, but me and my father... thats a whole other story that i'd rather not go into. I know how it is, and i'm here if you want to talk. I know i couldve used someone to talk to a long time ago.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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