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Teen Poetry #7

This Isn't Goodbye

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-03-14 06:49 PM

tears aren't the reason
she cries
lonesome nights will be spent
they'll talk
eventually
they'll be together
someday
nobody can forget
what they had
you won't
it's just going to take some time
he won't forget
neither will you

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

1 posted 2004-03-14 10:52 PM

i think this is a little short, and i didnt know how to read it, like i didnt know how to put it together. but besides that i liked it. its sad, i wonder why they arent together, and why they couldnt work it out. i always want to know more about poems like these. do you think it would be weird to make a sequal? haha. anyways. great write.

a123
Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 72

2 posted 2004-04-02 08:09 AM

Beautiful

i loved reading this.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-04-05 11:59 PM

I liked (:

Juju

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