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Teen Poetry #7

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Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2004-03-14 04:46 AM

why do I have to look at myself in this hole
the hole I look out at myself from
the hole I see my self in
the hole in witch society can ignore me

why do I have to be pulled by this hole
this hole that distorts reality
this hole that contains liquid evil
this hole that twits my soul

why do I have to hide myself in this hole
that same hole that controlled me
that same hole that destroyed me
that same hole that I hide myself in

so why do I really love this hole
the hole that I’m pushed into
this hole I’m admitted to
that same hole he lives in

if you don't like this poem read a little deeper, and if that diesn't change tell me why..............thanks for reading

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

1 posted 2004-03-14 11:09 AM

i enjoyed this poem so much....i always feel the way that you do.Thank you.Now i dont feel so alone....

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-03-14 12:17 PM

I like this. It's different, and deep. You have to really READ the poem to get the whole effect, and to really get it at all. I like that.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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