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0 posted 2004-03-12 06:43 PM


i cry just to hear your name
i cry just to see your face
why am i crying about you?
why am i letting you get to me like this
in my dreams you will disappear
in my thought you will disappear
in my heart you will disappear
goobye for now
goodbye forever!!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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From a cradle to a casket
1 posted 2004-03-14 02:20 PM


I like this poem so much...it captivates what I have felt many times...

Good read

Thanks

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