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muchos
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since 2003-11-29
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0 posted 2004-03-12 12:41 PM


these are just thoughts i mustered up, which kind of give a poetic feel....enjoy and give comments on the writing, not the situation. please.

i fear im losing it,
losing every bit of me i had to a world
where love is a crime, and death is a sin
surrounded by white walls
and only dreams of sanity.
broken mirrors behind a forbidden glass
tombs of laughter with no one smiling
how do you dream happy dreams
without a pleasent thought
i deny the truth
i deny reality
i will not accept it
who am i to judge?
who is anyone to judge?
each person has encounters with dilemmas
some triumphant and some not so much
i am not perfect
and neither is the person who walks beside me
take off your foolish masks
wear your own shoes and run away
run as you are
with your true self shining through
run at your own pase
not by the way of others
cry out your selfish ways
breath in new life and strive for your best
as each day is getting longer
its shrinking me into a tiny secluded box
of empty adventures and hopeless dreams
oh fresh new day
you bring promises for the future
promises for my life and who i'll become
i beg of you oh new beginning
give ME a chance to show my worth

© Copyright 2004 *Ashley Allin* - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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1 posted 2004-03-13 11:17 AM


I liked this, I believe all of us could relate to some part of this in one way or another. Nice write.

"And my heart still pumps twice as fast whenever you walk by. Cause I still love you."~ Blindside

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