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aRiEsAnGeL
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0 posted 2004-03-11 07:16 PM



You are such a special woman
inside and out
your heart so loving and caring
your mind so powerful and thoughtful

There is so much love out there for you
you are someone that everyone wants to surround
I dont know what you do,but,wherever you look,there is love all around

You are like a gleaming light
that people want to look at
they love you at first sight

You are my mother
and its so wonderful to be your daughter

There is no other woman like you
your heart so loving and caring
your mind so powerful and thoughtful
there is no other mother that Id rather have
I love you so very much

© Copyright 2004 Naomi Marie Alligood - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-12 01:45 AM


oh Naomi...you got me all misty-eyed

this is a beautiful write...I love you so much!

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2004-03-12 07:48 AM




Isn't life great?

Wonderful job Naomi!


"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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3 posted 2004-03-12 01:14 PM


Naomi~
How beautiful is this ?

Very !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-03-13 01:37 PM


Susan and Marge, thank you...you both are very special to me and I know you've touched my daughter too.

Naomi, I had to read this again and tell you thank you. Yeah, we have a pretty cool relationship

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5 posted 2004-03-14 06:42 AM


this is so lovely...
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6 posted 2004-03-21 07:47 PM


Great Job! I loved it!
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7 posted 2004-03-21 09:53 PM


Awww...Naomi....this is just lovely.
Enjoyed this!! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

kissa~rachelle
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8 posted 2004-03-21 10:01 PM


Naomi, very beautiful write. I loved it very much.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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9 posted 2004-05-03 03:00 PM


just thinkin' about ya

love you,
mom

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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10 posted 2004-05-03 08:32 PM


awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee..keep it upp  lovesssss
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