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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
If I died tomorrow Would you miss me the next day? How would you feel,sad,mad,disappointed? Not knowning of my whereabouts I stay long gone forever Where heaven makes the sky,and where the angels fly How would life be without me? Would it be the same or would it make my family and you go insane? Would you forget me? or would there be a place in your mind to where you could go to think of me? Would you be mine to keep? to make yourself feel better,you weep As years go by,you begin to forget what I looked like or the way I touched,but I would always be by your side until one day you died Wed be together Where heaven makes the sky,and where the angels fly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you would never be forgotten or faded (and you're not going to die any time soon...you can't leave me like that) The ending was pretty good though...reminds me of that video by Nickelback |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you could never fade, stars shine bright even after they die, they are NEVER forgotten  even amongst the sadness of this poem, the beauty within wants to be heard, and i heard her loud and clear. and Dixie mentioned that nickelback video..that darned video made me cry the first time i watched it! |
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