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through the trees |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket 
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As we look up at the stars laying on our backs, oh your smile! my face an inch from yours our spirits do this dance on top of us they intertwine and combine into one heart the breeze swoons us to sleep your words keep me warm all night long my life rolls off the tip of your tongue keep talking, your keeping me alive i feel your heart beat, it pulses through me your breathe is the soundtrack of my life keep singing this is for tonight the moon beckons a kiss lets swing on the Cypress' highest branches or walk down the beach hand in hand my thoughts are free like a wave upon the sand id walk to the end of the world just to say sleep tight just float with my through the trees over the ocean, into the sky twinkle smile and shine we are the stars and you are my one wish |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was alright. nothing really stuck out in my mind. nothing was bad either though..post some more stuff! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh I like this...neat format, I like the way it looks on the page and the feelings in it too |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
usually too many mushy love poems about some one and only make me gag... but this was cute and enchanting. i liked the description "your breathe is the soundtrack of my life" -like that line. awesome job |
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