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SixtiesChick03
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0 posted 2004-03-05 03:24 AM



Why do human hearts possess this feeling,
Love causes more damage than it does healing.
It can give you a natural high,
But for me, it just makes me want to die.
Love is nothing but a joke,
Especially when your life's hopes and dreams go up in smoke.
Time does not heal all wounds,
But if we can travel back in time then maybe.
Why do I have to suffer so much,
When all I want to feel is his touch?
I want to be held and never have to feel any more pain,
But all I can do now is suffer in vain.
I cry every night in my room,
Only wishing for my life to end soon.
My dreams are haunted by my memories,
But now these dreams are nightmares.
All I ever wanted was for you to love me forever,
But now that reality seems gone forever.
All I can do now is wish to forget,
Our past which I now regret.
There's now nothing I can say or do,
To make you understand what you did was so wrong.
I'm buried deep within this darkness as you,
But this is a place I don't want to be in for long.
Love is nothing but a deadly emotion,
Because all it can do is hurt in the end.
Why did you have to lie to me
When you said that you loved me?

© Copyright 2004 Sharlene - All Rights Reserved
BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
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1 posted 2004-03-05 10:15 AM


hey, I liked this poem. Especially the line "My dreams are haunted by my memories," that's really cool. I want you to know though, things do eventuelly get better. Believe me, I know how it is to feel like it won't, but in the end it will. Losing someone you love, and you thought loved you is hard, I know. But you will move on and someday find someone new that will make you feel just as good as you did before. I hope I helped a little, and I'm not boring you out of your mind by me rambling so much.lol. If you want to talk, feel free to email me.

Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's probably not the end.

a123
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since 2004-03-27
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2 posted 2004-03-28 06:21 AM


cheer up! atleast you have a way to express what you are feeling.believe me it helps in healing.

kissa~rachelle
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3 posted 2006-03-02 10:01 PM


ah yes. it is a deadly emotion. but in my opinion. it is worth it. because yes, sometimes you get hurt and it feels like your Whole world is crashing down...but then another one comes along...and you cant help but fall all over again in the chance that he is the ONE. and one day. he will be.

*karissa*

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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4 posted 2006-03-04 11:13 PM


you should just move on. its hard i know. i've been where you are right now. he is stupid for lieing to you and its his loss not yours. Cheer up.

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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