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Only In a Dream
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Only In a Dream |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
kill the thought of love tonight for kissing is only a dream you give all your heart to a man you love and then have it tattered and unclean take back all the words you've ever spoke trying to clean out your mouth tonight i'll clear my mind of these thoughts i have to try and make things right just get out!!! i hate you!!! You never heard me scream I yelled out at the top of my lungs or maybe it was all a dream find yourself if the dark moonlight and drown your weary mind i'll cry til the stars howl back at me or until im lost in the night i'll fear for all to come but mostly from what you provide take it all away from me You no longer worth my time your saddened soul has cursed my heart and there will never be a next time No apologies No forgiveness Its over WE ARE THROUGH ha! ha! ha! is all i have to say to you |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this, It started serious but in the end with you saying ha ha ha, changed the mood of the poem. All in all I thought it was well done.  -Ash Im a child. |
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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
this was very good.....i enjoyed it |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
It's cute. I liked it. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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