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muchos
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 102


0 posted 2004-02-26 07:59 PM


You were gone but now your back
What point do you have to prove?
You say that its not different
How can i believe its true?
I loved you in a soft sweet rhyme
You told me i was dumb
Then you told me it wasnt time
And you acted very numb
How is it we're through
And yet we're still together?
I'd really like to hold you
But push you even further
I want to take you in my arms
I'll keep you here with me
Ahhh is all I have to say
Why cant you let me be?
F*ck you got me crazy
The world is not the same
Just let me be who I want to be
So run with your guilt and shame
At times i hate you,
At times i love you,
its the hold you have on me
I wish that i could throw you off a cliff
So i could feel free.


© Copyright 2004 *Ashley Allin* - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-02-26 09:00 PM


Nice... Very nice... I can totally relate.

~Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A
2 posted 2004-02-26 10:13 PM


Hey hunny just wanted to let you know im still here for ya and i totally have not forgotten about someone as special as you email me sometime ok just to say hi once and while. By the way another great poem written by you you got a gift thats for sure.

Hugs,
Chris

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