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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
here's our newest song...sort of.... Dave magazines and tv screens telling you what you should be it's hard to feel it's hard to believe... in a world of black and white if it's not wrong then it's not right you've gotta find some place to hide... Bridge 1: Then i see you coming along saying "everything is wrong" Gotta make them believe that you're strong enough to carry on... Don't sell out you won't buy in this is where your life begins Gotta avoid the bitter end You've gotta try again... Chorus: Don't give up.. there's another day there's a million ways to get it right (you're gonna get it right) Get back up... it's just another heartache, jsut another heartbreak, It's nothing that can't be undone... It's not the first time you've been down this road, your soles are worn your soul is torn... Now it's time to stand up You've gotta fight to get up Don't let no one push around Bridge 1: Chorus: Bridge 2: So here you are again.. Standing on a bridge... And i see you there, on the other end.... (solo) Bridge 3: I know that...you will miss her when she goes But i know that...you'll get by... Kind of a weird format, sorry, but it's an amazing song if you could only hear it. But i always like response to my lyrics so bring it on and i'll post more  "if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask." |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Kewl song. I liked it. I bet it sounds amazin' with the right beat and music with it!! Keep Postin'! ~Kissa  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I had a pretty good tune going to that one in my head...it sounded like a punk song. Good lyrics...if your record any of your songs, you should put a link in your profile for people to listen to them. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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