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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-02-23 07:14 PM


With so little to care for,
You wonder if life is worth living,
If friends are worth having,
If love is worth staying for,
If promises are worth keeping.
Your loneliness invades your privacy,
It taunts you,
It torments you,
It makes you contemplate things like,
If the dark is better,
Than staying in the light.
Or if your existence,
Means anything to anyone,
Anything at all…..

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

© Copyright 2004 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-02-23 10:16 PM


I liek this one too. I love freestyle a lot, and this was very awesome.

~Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2004-02-28 09:05 AM


It's healthy to ponder this stuff on occasion because it's good to question everything.  We just don't wanna dwell on it too much...good points and good poem.

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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