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Teen Poetry #7

oh baby i promise

Vixen28
Junior Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 13
wise,va

0 posted 2004-02-22 10:06 PM

oh baby i promise
Well be together forever
Ohh i will never break up with you
your everything to me

Now 9 months later what are you saying
oh i dotn know To much stuff
to many fights
you dont make me happy

now how the tables turn
now that i now i love you more
And now that i need you
yet you dont need or love me
Ohh look how the tables have turned

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-02-22 11:21 PM

I guess it just happens that way sometimes. Sorry to hear about that. Anyway, nice to meet you and keep writing.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Vixen28
Junior Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 13
wise,va

2 posted 2004-02-23 01:33 PM

thanks A bunch yeah i relized to not trust ppl with everything that i have because there is always one that will let you down and rip your heart out

*KeNdRa*

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

3 posted 2004-02-23 02:19 PM

ohh wow...I like this. It seems really nice, and I understand how you feel :-(

Class Of 2004
"Water Over Matter"

Vixen28
Junior Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 13
wise,va

4 posted 2004-02-23 07:17 PM

Thanks I haven't ever really put my poems out there ever and its great how ppl are responding

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