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Teen Poetry #7

Walrus to your oyster

Adam Alexander
Junior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 11
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0 posted 2004-02-21 07:40 AM

I'll be the walrus to your oyster,
the sheperd to your sheep.
I'll be the in every thought you have
even while you sleep..
I'll make you laugh, make you think,
I'll even make you weep.
I'll be the walrus to your oyster,
the sheperd to your sheep...

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2004-02-21 12:10 PM

good job. i enjoyed the whole concept. at first i thought the whole walrus thing was weird, but it ended up being fine. good work.
-alex

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2004-02-21 02:39 PM

I LOVE the rhythm...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-02-21 11:36 PM

I liek this. It sounds like part of one of those little kids books, but better. I really love the whole idea of it.
~Vampire kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

4 posted 2004-03-02 02:29 PM

I've been meaning to comment on your 2 new poems in here but I haven't really taken the time too. *pouts*...I'm sorry. LOL. I still don't fully understand this poem since I've never read "Alice In Wonderland" but I think it's cute. Hehe. You should write more...I miss seeing it around.

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

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