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Teen Poetry #7

My Perfect Dance

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2004-02-17 11:34 AM

Flying on broken wings,
Soaring to a height I have never known,
Above and beyond,
Show me the way,
Only you can.

Sweet clouds soft as your touch,
A dream, feels so surreal.

Whisper in my ear what it is you feel,
I hope you say just what I would like to hear,
That you'll always be here for me,
To catch my tears as they fall,
To make them dissapear as quickly as they had come.

Without a single word I say to you,
I'll be your dream come true.

Flying on broken wings,
Soaring to a height I have never known,
Above and beyond,
Show me the way,
Only you can.

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2004-02-17 11:58 AM

This is very different from what you normally write...but I like it. Good, descriptive words. Loves.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-18 10:04 PM

This is sickeningly sweet. :-) I like it though. I agree it is different from what you usually write. Nice job.
~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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