my life-1st post tell me what you think

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Teen Poetry #7

my life-1st post tell me what you think

Vixen28
Junior Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 13
wise,va

0 posted 2004-02-16 08:16 PM

as i think of my life
and everything thats happened
of all the nights i have stayed up crying
to all the days we have set and just laughed
i ask my self was it worth it did it all level out
did i make all the right choices

i know that I have messed up in my life
but had i made everything right
i gave up all of my friends just to stay at home
and to talk to you
now was that the right choice?

i gave you my life and everything i had
but yet i dont think you saw
what really went on but now
with everything said and done and
my life wrote out

i wonder if all that has happened was just for one big reason that maybe all the bad triggered a good and so on that maybe just maybe my life was told out and you really were my one and only*

*just wrote what was one my mind*

[This message has been edited by Vixen28 (02-16-2004 11:21 PM).]

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-02-17 02:57 AM

Hello there and may I be the first to welcome you to pip! Reflective musings always touch the deepest. My hopeless romantic heart reached out to this one, and whose to say in the end? Perhaps they were your one and only or perhaps there still out there waiting for you. Anyways nicely done, very good first post hope to continue to see your stuff.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2004-03-02 06:32 PM

I loved this, It was great for your firsy post

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2004-03-03 02:48 PM

WELCOME!!!! I liked yer poem. You made some interesting points of thought and the mood was really steady...good stuff.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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