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kissa~rachelle
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0 posted 2004-02-16 02:20 PM



I sit in my room,
in the dark of night.
My incense filling the air.
I smoke a cigarette
while my parents talk about their day in the other room.
I told them.
They were dissapointed, and sad.
They sentenced me to a month of isolation.
I've gotten worse.
I lie to them.
There goes another month.
I've gotten worse.
Their favorite punishment.
Too bad it doesnt really do anything to me.
I leave the house at an unknown hour.
ahh.... another month.
I've gotten worse.
no more months. No more punishments
They stop caring.
There's no punishment worse.
~Vampire Kisses


I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (02-20-2004 10:45 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-02-16 04:49 PM


You got it right...nothing is worse than feeling other people don't care, especially if they are family. *hugs*

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
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2 posted 2004-02-16 04:54 PM


wow...
what made you start "messing up" in the first place?
I hate the feeling of their unexceptance...
GREAT poem. I felt your pain.
~Lex

kissa~rachelle
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3 posted 2004-02-16 05:32 PM


I dont know why. I guess the
"wrong crowd." Thanks for the comments, and the hugs. Heres your very own Vampire Kiss! I hate the feeling too. Thanks for the comments.
~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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