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Naked Truth
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0 posted 2004-02-16 01:53 PM



What is right?
right in definition is correct, suitable, appropriate,straight,genuine,real,perferable.
right is an opinion, this is a topic that was sparked up in an old class I once had, psychology. Who decides what is right? You do.
right is the side that is picked when the other is wrong. All an illusion in the mind, seeing how no two people are the same, how can we all think the same. we can only understand the same. Be on the same track but not the same runner. right is never Right.
right is judgment;
Judgment is a formal utterance of an authoritative opinion.
Who can pass judgment, well we all can.
But who are we.
Why does your opinion count? The only judging that can be done is not by man kind but of mankind by God.
If you dont believe in a God then what I am saying is irrelevant, but for those who believe in God or have a belief of a God, know that his opinion is the only opinion that counts. His judgement of what is right, is Right.
so that brings me back to, what is right?


Today I sat at the dinner table in a conversation that created my relationship life. Yea, yea I know "relationship life" arent we so tired of that, but hey this is interaction between two people with their environment; this started to sound like global issues and one of the five themes of geography.
Anyhow, I got so caught up in the conversation i had to put the person who was on the other line on hold to get a cup of coffee. so as i sip to get relaxed from this stimulation of this hot form of a drug. i started to make some decisions. decisions for me and the other person. yea like any other couple we are having complications, so deciding what should happen or what should be going on is what we did. everything being left up to me i overrode the fact that we should be together. because things arent right. so the cup tips over in frustration, in my mind and my body started to move without being told. so pissed of Im cleaning up this sticky, brown, sweet smelling liquid. and then i pause. what is right?
How did I know what I was saying was right for us?
Me being a person of many thoughts I pick a note tab and a pen to scratch down a couple of mental notes.
and i came up with this

You was so right
i had to go left
Cause right was all wrong

For now on I will start saying wrong, left, no.
Which are all supposed to be the opposite of what is right.
But are we sure, how do you know what is wrong, isnt wrong, because it is Right? riiighttt!
why do we always go right when lost, when left could be the way?

just a thought
dont get caught up in right, if in relationships we go for right, when it comes down to it why is the ring, the commitment, put on the left hand.
Nothing is actually how it seems. Someone so wrong is more than likely the person you fall for. Mr/Mrs right never seems to be quite right, they always go wrong. you catch my flow.
Decide your own path, on your own beliefs. and not what someone else tells you is right. who knows they could be Wrong.

© Copyright 2004 ~Kay - All Rights Reserved
Match
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since 2002-07-01
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1 posted 2004-03-06 12:56 PM


I dont know about this poem, It ddint really flow to me. hmmm
-Ash

Im a child.

candyland201
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since 2004-01-03
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2 posted 2004-03-11 11:23 PM


Well i loved what u were speaking, i understand it also, so u keep writing u flow with the wind boo
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-13 01:28 PM


for sure, something to think about
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