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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
why am i here? what am i supposed to do?? why do i have to put up with this crap??? why is it always me who gets rejected for all the school dances?? and the perfect girls get with everything they could want why do they want what ive got??? whenever im happy they come round and show off what thy have and i dont why is it i put up with this why do i let them steal my life right outta my hands? why is it you like to see me in pain? and not knowing what to do and how to deal with all this?? or is it you dont know what it is you want out this life so you come and steal what is makin me happy thinkin it will do the same for you??? you just have to ruin my life dont you??? just to make you feel all the more powerful...... i dont know why you do the things you od but you only do them to help yourself without thinking how you affect everyone else around you you are a lil miss perfect who loves to cause everyone else pain this was written about a group of girls at my school who have no idea what they want from life so they try to steal everone elses lives thinking it will make them happy....... just like the person who they stole it from this is me.... like it or not.... |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
There's a group of girls like that at my school too, I'd never date any of them, I can't stand people like that. I like the way you put it. An interesting read. x |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
hey. i'm a guy, but i know how you feel. i'm an observant fellow and have seen this in teenage girls. i think you would take pleasure in knowing that the type of girls you are talking about are only going to suffer in the end. (They're probably suffering now) The best thing you can do is be strong and happy yourself, to make your life steadfastly happy no matter what comes around. I mean, you only have one life to live, right? You might as well enjoy it! Happiness comes from within, not the dates and the dances and the stuff. Oh, by the way, here's my poem, which touches on the same issue as yours, but in a different perspective. /pip/Forum85/HTML/000789.html |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like this, and i can definately relate to it. There are a group of girls lke that at my school to, and there are even a group of fuys like that! Some of my friends even act li,e that sometimes. Like when i am happy about something, they point out the downsides of it, and make it to hwere i am not happy about it anymore. Anyways, i relly like this and i hope to hear more! ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
hey thanks for the replies i agree there is only one way of being happy and that is by being true to yourself and to your friends......... since writing this poem ive changed my life motto to: 'live life full and free.... be who you are and who you want to be.... its the only way to be happy.....' thanks again for the replies. Mel this is me.... like it or not.... |
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