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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-02-06 05:41 AM


People think they know who i am
but in truth they only know a face
that i put on whilst im in public
only a few people will
ever truly see who i am for real
and know what im actually going through
these people are few and far between
even my family see a face
they have no idea who i amreally
honestly even i dont know sometimes.........

this was written whilst i was having a major identity crisis and i didnt know how else to get any of my feelings out and off my chest......

© Copyright 2004 Ruth - All Rights Reserved
NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England
1 posted 2004-02-06 08:06 AM


Poetry is allways your best bet, i liked it well written.
C.J

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A
2 posted 2004-02-06 10:11 PM


Very well written!! Your right not everyone sees the real and its hard at times. If you want to know how i see you then i see you as one of god's heaven sent angels that has beauty of a princess and a heart of gold. Keep smiling hun something will work out!!

Hugs,
Chris

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2004-02-07 04:46 AM


thanks for the replies......
heaven sent angel....... that is a new one.... thanks chris.... i more or less get called a lil' devil..... dunno why tho...
thanks again
Mel

this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!
i am woman hear me roar

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-02-07 11:01 PM


I like it.  Its about a problem everyone or at least I did has.  Nice write

-GIS

Why live for gold when you can be happy?

[...and the work, it was fun.]-Kurt Cobain

Ixxi
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since 2004-01-02
Posts 77
England
5 posted 2004-02-08 11:58 AM


I liked it, nice job.
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