darkness devoured and spewed forth

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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-02-05 09:44 PM

Let me devour your light, aiding the endless night,
Let fires rage in your soul, giving guidance to nightmares.
Prepare for the final fight, the fog of war covers your eyes,
Give your spirit the deth pill and see how it terminally fares.

Load your four chambered heart with this evil and darkness,
Spin with all your might for this last game of russian roulette.
Awake the gleam of deth to contrast your pale starkness,
I pray for hades to comsume your evil inside, this wicked pet.

I have signed your last lost will to my own deth warrant
So our coincidents coincide like the drop of the gullitine and thud of the head.
Shake the darkness destroying your mind in this acid storm's torrent,
For only your end will decide a new beginning for all here, the living and ded.

Die and believe that truth is absolute in the world
Though you know truth never believed absolutely in you.
Release this simple act into my mind only to be hurled
Back into your god-forsaken face that repulses this coup.

I will crucify your love tonight on this bed of roses
And the thorns will serve nicely as the nails i've looked for.
Strangle your cry, it only brings the haunted to your pose;
Destroy your mind, destroy your will, i will destroy your core.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

[This message has been edited by young_blood (02-06-2004 10:23 AM).]

drummerboy678
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

1 posted 2004-02-06 12:04 PM

Damn man.  How old are you?

This is awesome.
"Die and believe that truth is absolute in the world--Though you know truth never believed absolutely in you."

Thats great.  Wish I had some things to help you, but I really dont.

Again, awesome job.  You and a few others are the reason I come to this forum.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-02-06 09:58 AM

im 17, thanks for the comments man

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

3 posted 2004-08-06 06:13 PM

I liked it, nice job, you deffinetly have talent.

~*.:Leah:.*~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-08-06 06:41 PM

Load your four chambered heart with this evil and darkness,
Spin with all your might for this last game of russian roulette.

I liked that part a lot.

The poem flowed well, and the imagery, and metaphors, kicked ass.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2004-08-06 09:14 PM

wow you brought this back from no where. thanks a lot kissa

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