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unwantedspork Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 24 |
finally, one I kind of like. But i dont know what to name it. Where were you? I called. I sat out side for you, on this red and pink day. You said you were sorry, I said that I cried Do you know what you do to me? What you look like in my eyes? You started out as a dream. Bleach blond hair, with eyes of green. A smile to warm anyone’s heart. But now I look at you, with you’re whores a dangling, And your sluts a hanging from your arms There is nothing you cant hide. But I still cant help myself, I cry. Your hair is dyed black, Your eyes have turned red. Your smile has faded into a sheepish grin. There is nothing you cant hide. You were the beauty who turned into the beast. And I cried. To say the least. Your whores and sluts follow you around While im in my room tearing every memory, throwing every picture away. And I cried. For their wasted money. fore youll only change tomarrow. |
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Barbara Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32 |
Hey.. I really liked this poem.... I think its beautiful, because I can connect to it...  |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like this. I am sorry you fell in love, or so it seems, with such a jerk. I know how it feels, unfortunately. hope to hear more!!~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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chicken Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 44 |
love to read more of your stuff! u should like it its a great poem sorry for ur loss! an pain Emma |
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chicken Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 44 |
have to post agen i wanna add to my library! |
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