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Teen Poetry #7

Last Ode To a Lost Life

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-02-02 06:16 PM

Another old poem i found written a yr ago after my ex and i broke up

As the tears slide down my face,
I remember your smile so full of grace…

Our past won’t get to die,
Even while I sit and cry…

No matter how many tears I shed,
It’ll not change that you’re dead…

But one consolation I do keep,
That our memories and history run so deep…

Now I let go and cry,
As I raise my head to say goodbye

[This message has been edited by SixtiesChick03 (02-02-2004 06:57 PM).]

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

1 posted 2004-02-02 06:55 PM

Wow, so sad. i hoep you are doing better. Your write, things that are in the passed should stay because no matter what we think, we cannot change the passed. Great write!

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