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SixtiesChick03
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since 2003-03-27
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0 posted 2004-02-02 06:07 PM


Trust...Or Lack There Of

Nothing I do escapes your eyes and ears
An accidental network of spies made sure of that...not your fault
I can't talk to anyone, or flirt, without someone seeing and telling you
I give up.

Why can't I trust anyone?
Oh yeah two reasons...
No one really listens, no one really cares.
I'm just someone to talk about, to unload your drama on.

Why do I even bother?
the things we say are superficial at best
I've tried to trust
You all had to give me reasons not to.

Well you know what...
Forget it, I don't care anymore
ask me no questions, i'll volunteer nothing.
Leave me be, i'm finally safe from the pain of betrayal

© Copyright 2004 Sharlene - All Rights Reserved
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
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1 posted 2004-07-07 05:56 PM


it was good, i really liked the last part, i know how you feel, keep writing you have talent.

~*.:Leah:.*~

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-07-07 07:57 PM


I can totally relate to this.  I will, for example, tell someone something.  By the next day everyone knows.  I understand your pain as well,

~Alli~

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