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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2004-02-01 05:24 PM



The outside, A haze of dense gray
Arisen over the fresh snow
Pale, white, soft in color
Harsh, is whipping cold winds
This kiss from I to you, warms
Uncorupted by the outside
This fire burns inside, melting
Turning all hopes, desires, a real
Through the eternal darkness,
of the harsh winter
I see your face, Ruby eyes
Cutting through the rich entrapment of your beauty
Your form takes place among the outlines
Of hope, of longing
A transparent ache screams
Echos through the night
Your heart has struck a spark,
My fire rages for you.

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
1 posted 2004-08-01 03:22 PM


not bad, keep writing, I'm not sure if i understood the main part of it though...

~*.:Leah:.*~

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-12-26 03:31 PM


I understand what you're trying to say...atleast I think I do.
I like this alot...keep posting!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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