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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2004-02-01 05:24 PM



At this time and moment,
All is well.
Time has stopped
The wind nolonger blows,
The earth stops spinning,
The waves nolonger crash,
Lightning forget its flash
Children cease to play
Fathers forget to work
Cars nolonger run
Planes dont fly to the sun
The pictures hold in time
Before crashing to the floor
all is well
You walked in the door

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
Amara
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.
1 posted 2004-02-01 07:08 PM


How sweet! No longer is two words, though.

Light keep you always,
Amara

May light keep you, faith guide you, and love and laughter always find you.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2004-02-01 10:49 PM


*Big smiles*
Lovely
Liz x

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
3 posted 2004-02-02 03:54 PM


nicely protrayed.
You expanded on the feeling of time stopping.
I liked this.  

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
4 posted 2004-02-02 11:31 PM


Yes, i have felt this way before, actually I still do, about one person. He knows who he is. I hope to hear more!!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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