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greco
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since 2003-09-27
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buffalo ny

0 posted 2004-02-01 12:29 PM


hey i posted this awhile ago and it didnt seem to flow and now after re reading it i hope i made it better
thanks

Leaving the thing I love
Leaving the friends that have been made
I can’t explain it all but I have to go
Something inside is telling me not to stay

What it is I will never know
Night after night trying to decide
Cant sleep tossing and turning
Why does this come up now I hate to decide

To leave is devastating
To leave is for the better
Its time to go just deal with it

Moving on the only cure
Listening to the past echos
I now realize what i have done
Knowing now what was wrong

© Copyright 2004 greg - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-02-01 10:01 AM


Finding the right time to make a move is never easy,,,good write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana
2 posted 2004-02-01 05:22 PM


Great poem. Cant tell you how many times I have wanted to Run away. Lol mostly just running away to my girlfriend but anyways. I love your open lines. Its my still to have open poetry...nothing can be left unsaid or not described enough

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

dodge_chick2003
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since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
3 posted 2004-08-04 02:50 PM


Hey I moved to California a year ago, I wanted to leave Michigan but now I know that I made the worng choice and now I am moving back there. I hope in the end you made the right choices.
*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-12-26 03:27 PM


I can really relate to this....keep posting!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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