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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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since 2004-01-08
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0 posted 2004-01-30 11:26 AM




I try to deny what i have
I try to be like the 1 you want.

i try to forget
i go through pain and death

i try to be like they want me to be
i try to have human being's beliefs


i try to make myself happy ,just not to be denied.
i wake up in a morningor two.

but all i see the human's anger
like i have done something that cant be forgetton

all i have to say to the people that hate ,may god bless u and thanks for all you have done..b/c i knowyou WILL NEVER change..


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SweetStephanie
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 18
Alabama,
1 posted 2004-01-31 05:01 AM


I like it but why are you tring to change for everyone else. Why can't you just be yourself

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