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blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
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an akward state of mind

0 posted 2004-08-21 03:49 PM


i was timed writing this and haven't really tried to work on it more yet...


The sun of gifts
pours rays of birth
down to the soil
bearing the roots of the grass
providing nutrients for
the growing calf
roaming the wild pasture
along the side of the mountain
that overlooks the hungry waters
of the vast pacific
licking the rocky shore.

An impatient woman stands in line
amonst the hustle of
the noisy crowd;
All rushing,
All complaining,
All overfed,
All awaiting their burger.

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2004-08-21 08:08 PM


All awaiting their burger.
good god, that made me laugh.
I enjoyed this.
I hate being timed.

blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
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an akward state of mind
2 posted 2004-08-27 07:48 PM


i'm glad it made you chuckle
*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-12-25 06:38 PM


I like this...very observant. lol.
Merry Christmas!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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