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Essential Distress
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since 2004-01-22
Posts 33


0 posted 2004-01-26 08:10 PM



lightly touch the earth...

feel the energy within...

feirce creation... gentle birth....

demise of mind... and sin...


oh my soul...  oh my soil...

my only fertile star...

cringe lightly... strain instead of toil...

dont mind about the scar...


Bind your heart to body...

whisp, to seeming form....

sheet to post... nail to glove...

phenomenon to norm...

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IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10
Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time
1 posted 2004-01-26 10:26 PM


Oh I wish I had time to say more..but I like it

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

ascending_ecstasy
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since 2004-01-21
Posts 102

2 posted 2004-01-31 02:21 AM


very nice. i like it. well done champ.
blood_red_summer
Junior Member
since 2004-01-31
Posts 20

3 posted 2004-01-31 02:23 AM


now if thats what all your stuff is like you are awesome like lexie
ascending_ecstasy
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since 2004-01-21
Posts 102

4 posted 2004-02-01 01:04 AM


I'll bump this back up eh? COMMENT WANKERS
blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
5 posted 2004-02-15 05:12 PM


Perfect.


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