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Finding my footing
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Finding my footing |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Highschool was a whirlwind, Problems gallore. Blurry faces through the halls, Stumbling to the floor. Could never quite catch myself, When i sensed that i was about to fall. Always a minute or a second too late, Always found myself backed up against a wall. I graduated and escaped, Or maybe i closed my eyes and ran. Tried to find a different path, Tried to understand. Found myself in college, Confused with only a different group of faces. I was hoping to fill the void, Hoping to fill the spaces. So now that all has failed, The choices were inevitably never right. I try to find the answer, I need to shine in a different light. The day will come when my footing will hold me, My expectations and experience will be hand in hand. Until the day comes when i can find my footing in life, I'll just accept myself for the way i am. Standing on the edge of the world |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i liked it. the rhyming made it really smooth and alot more interesting than if you had just done free-verse. good work. i want to see some more!! -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow, he liked it! lol This was really good, i liked it too! lol I hope to hear more! ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It means a lot to me that you guys liked it!! Thank you very much for taking the time to read it  Standing on the edge of the world |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I was hoping to see some of your work around here, Michele! This was really good....and you've got it right, right there at the end.....just accept and love yourself and everything else falls into place. Welcome back!  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank u!!....It feels good to be back!! Standing on the edge of the world |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
Awesome, I loved it! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
awesome job! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's really nice to be back and see some familiar names i'm glad to get to read your work again thanks for sharing You don't have to say you love me just be close at hand....... |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
no critique here. Fantastic job! A life without love…is no life at all. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
awesome poem . . . i really liked the title ~Alli~ |
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a123 Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 72 |
wow! I can completely realate to this. love a123 |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hi!!!! I've missed you! I feel like I haven't talked to you for sooo long. You know whats funny, my bestfriend and i were just discussing the general idea of this poem the other day. That lost feeling. I know how it feels. I think everyone goes through it. If they don't, something's wrong haha Anyway, so good to read something from you again, keep in touch! -=Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
why hello thAR! i liked the poem. Thought the ending was pretty dandy. The poem definitely stands out for what you believe in, and thats courageous. VEry well done. hope you remember me lol peAce Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey everyone!!!! WOW!! How did this thing get dug up?? I posted this in january!! LOL i havent read my mail in like a month and i see i had 7 replies...very random but so enjoyable!!! Aww such familiar faces!!DQ It really has been soooooo long since we talked!! Hope everyone is well and i appreciate all the comments from those who i dont know so well!! Thank you everyone for taking the time to read it and respond!!!! xoxox Standing on the edge of the world |
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