I hate you, yet i love you.

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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-01-23 09:32 PM

I hate the feelings taht i get,
wehn you're around.
I wanna tell you how i feel,
but know i will never make a sound.
I love it when you smile,
I love it when you laugh.
I love the way you look at me,
But i also hate it,
Dont you see??
I hate it,
cause i know,
we wil never be.
When you smile
even if i am sad,
you light up my day,
even if before it had been bad!
When you laugh,
you make me laugh to.
Even if it is at my own expense,
at something stupid that i do.
When you look at me,
It's like no one else is around.
You say you love me,
and always turn my frowns upside down.
But then i wanna die,
cause i know its all a lie.
I have come to realize,
that it's all just a game,
you are just really good at,
and you break my heart
and prove that i was wrong,
once again.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2004-01-24 06:04 PM

Love is such a confusing thing...Great poem and im shur millions have stood where you are at the moment...unfortunately love can freeze us...when the time is right hopefully u'll say everything u'll always want...good job!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-01-26 05:31 PM

Thanks, love is a confusing thing. I appreciate all your comments!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

3 posted 2004-07-10 09:05 PM

Hey, I really liked it!! It deffinetly had some emotion behind it, the first couple lines you had some spelling errors, no biggie though! good write, I hope to read more of your poety!!

~*.:Leah:.*~

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

4 posted 2004-07-21 11:04 PM

Really sweet one, its like a taste of love and the fear of liers, i enjoyed it

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-07-22 07:48 PM

wow kissa...i'm speechless...lol...

~Alli~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2004-07-26 01:38 AM

I thought it was nice..
.
advice: dont fall for the same trick twice.

good luck, good poem

I left my wallet in El Segundo...
And I gotta get it
I got got to get it!

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

7 posted 2004-07-26 09:17 PM

I totally know how you are feeling when you wrote this. Love is such a tricky thing. It stinks that you have to go through all the crappy stuff to get to the good. Great expression throughout! I thought it was really good!

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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