»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #7
»
anti love.
| Teen Poetry #7 |
|
anti love. |
|
|
Essential Distress Junior Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 33 |
why should i stab my heart... or allow the blade of another to enter my soul... why do we look over scars and think we have learnt something of them... and then try once more to capture another free spirit... why do we try and change people... who are exactly the way they are meant to be... is there someone for everyone? Or are our eyes distorted... do we choose what we want to see.... let us tranquilize emotion...... paralize the quickly beating heart..... this is an anti love poem... dont let me discourage you to start..... |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Essential Distress - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
I'm glad to see you took my advice of not forcing the rhymes, well done. It's a good poem. I wanna see more. Write more. More damn you taya. I want more.... You are a sailor, you are a star, you can sing music, with a guitar... (Above poem entitled "Taya" lol....) |
||
|
kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
lol~ I like this, it is good.I really liked the ending. I want to hear more too! :-) lol ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
||
|
Essential Distress Junior Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 33 |
welll there's 2 new ones floating around the teen forum somewhere for all those interested... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
