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Lindsay
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0 posted 2004-08-18 12:08 PM



I have to stay strong, I have to strong
I say this over and over to myself
I have to stay strong with what is all going on
I can not break down, or at least not in front of anybody
Put on a smile, act like everything is ok
Yup, I made everyone believe I’m fine
No one sees beyond my act
No one sees that I’m twisted up inside
They don’t see past the fake laugh
To the pain I feel inside
They don’t see the scars on my wrist
No one notices the fear in my eyes
The fear of being alone, the fear of dieing
I cry out, but my screams are silent
No one hears, no one cares
Only silence…

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-18 12:21 PM


Well, I just wandered in here...I'm not a teen, just saw your name and it is spelled just like my nieces'.  So, I'm glad I bopped in here.  If she were writing, I surely would want to read her sweet words.  Lindsay, you have a voice here.  You express your emotions well.  Keep 'em coming.  And I hear you.  
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2 posted 2004-08-18 01:00 AM


oh sweetie, such a heart felt poem...remember that you are always heard in here so go ahead and spill whats on your mind. This is where I come to let it all out...this was very well written, very emotional and very strong, I could really feel where you were coming from. A sad but Beautiful write.
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

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3 posted 2004-08-18 04:25 PM


Wow, this poem is just so...emotional.  I can relate to it in soooo many ways.  Just remember to stay strong, and you'll get through whatever is going on.

~Alli~


I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

kissa~rachelle
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4 posted 2004-08-18 05:40 PM


wow...this was really scary..how much i could relate to it...

Amazing write.

Karissa

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