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Ixxi
Member

since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

0 posted 2004-01-18 01:45 PM

Ctrl + Alt + Del

I cannot open this item into a window that will display properly.
I need to download new software before I can show you what it’s like inside.
I am fixed behind this screen staring at you powerlessly as you happily mess around with my different features.
You don’t get bored. You just keep typing and clicking,
Forever entering new, different, confusing thoughts inside my head.
My browser finds this difficult to cope with. I cannot handle all these different folders,
All these different pages to open, all these hyperlinks, thrown at me all the time. I need a break sometimes,
I want to be switched off.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

1 posted 2004-01-22 02:18 AM

aha! finally someone to express something in a different way. thankyou, i enjoyed that, write more.

Essential Distress
Junior Member

since 2004-01-22

Posts 33

2 posted 2004-01-22 11:43 PM

FANTASTIC!!!

loved it.

thats true creativity.... really... lovely...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-01-26 05:36 PM

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                             e!!!
This is very...creative. You have a unique way of thinking. I like it. :-) I hope to see more of your work!
~kissa~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-03-21 11:29 PM

Wow! This poem is so creative and orginal. I love it!

Keep up the good work!

drummerboy678
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

5 posted 2004-03-21 11:47 PM

Lxxi-
Honestly, I wasn't really crazy about the style of writing in this poem.
I do want to applaude you for doing somethign that I've never seen anyone do on this forum.  And that is write something creatively, from another perspective.  It opens you up to a whole new world of ideas.

Anyways, this is a great idea.  I just didn't love the actual poem itself.  Still, great use of the imagination though.

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

6 posted 2004-03-22 04:50 AM

i didn't like the format of the poem. to me it just seemed like it's a jumble of random thoughts on this subject.

BUT, the creativity of this pice is so unique i liked it.....keep writing

HI this is Matt's friend and i just had to add that this was awsome i loved it thanks for letting me read

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

7 posted 2004-03-22 04:31 PM

is matts friend cute???

~LoL~ I posted on here once, but it has been a loooooong time since i read it, and i just wanted to say again, that I LOVE THIS poem. Very unique, and just awesome.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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